The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows how many admissions were issued to sports
events
, theme
parks and cinemas in 2009, Further
, the table reveals ticket prices with the classification of single and family tickets
to various events
in the same year.
Going to the cinema was both the most popular and cheapest of entertainment in the year 2009, Cinemas attracted more people
than sports events
and theme
parks combined. Whilst 1,050,000 people
attended to watch movies, one out of three people
visited theme
parks and 150,000 went to sports events
.
Movie tickets
were far cheaper than other entertainment venues. Football games cost around $73 per single person with little reduction for families. Basketball and Cricket game tickets
cost $34 and $24 for individual admission respectively for families. However
, Cricket game family ticket shows considerable savings. Moreover
, There was a significant reduction in theme
park family tickets
and it saved $70 for getting individual tickets
for four people
.
This
chart reveals the cinema was the most favourable entertainment venue in the year 2009.Submitted by agdanush on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words events, theme, tickets, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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