Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for peoples health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays,eating fast
food
are
increasing even though doctors Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in
all Change preposition
apply
the
Change preposition
over the
worlds
Fix the agreement mistake
world
advice
to avoid it. The main Replace the word
advise
reasons
is the individual lifestyle.Fix the agreement mistake
reason
However
, the
possible solution is changing Correct article usage
a
in
life routines.
In Change preposition
apply
this
decade most individuals eating unhealthy meals because of their lifestyle. In other words
, people
spending
most of their days outside Wrong verb form
spend
home
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the home
a home
in
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at
works
.Fix the agreement mistake
work
so
, fast foods are the easiest and fastest way to eat. Capitalize word
So
In addition
, when they back
home after Add a missing verb
are back
long
day Correct article usage
a long
order
meals Replace the word
ordering
are
popular for most Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
instead
of cooking their dishes . For instance
, the survey done on
2023 Change preposition
in
done
at Sultan Qaboos University showed that 90% of workers Unnecessary verb
apply
eating
fast Wrong verb form
eat
food
daily.Therefore
, it seems logical that individuals
life routine is the main reason for rising the percentage of eating fast Fix the agreement mistake
individual
food
.
In
the other hand, if Change preposition
On
people
aware
of the junk meals drawbacks, they will avoid it . Add a missing verb
are aware
In other words
, awareness is the key to change
Wrong verb form
changing
this
habit and nowadays there are
delicious Change the verb form
is
heath
Correct your spelling
healthy
food
they just needs
to change their choices. Change the verb form
need
For example
, according to
Oman TV , in some developed countries when the
awareness Correct article usage
apply
increase
70% of Change the verb form
increases
people
turn to healthy routines. Next,
governments could also
helped
by forcing citizens to pay fast Change the verb form
help
be helped
food
tax
and if they spend more than one meal on week they are responsible for their cost of healthcare Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
Thus
, means
Correct pronoun usage
this means
this
issue it
could be solved or at Correct pronoun usage
apply
less
decline sharply.
In conclusion, Replace the word
least
although
the junk food
problem rise
because of busy days , turning their lifestyle to Wrong verb form
is rising
healthier
life helps to Correct article usage
a healthier
reducing
it and Change the verb form
reduce
government
should ask those Correct article usage
the government
how
eat junk foods daily to pay tax and Correct word choice
who
the
healthcare is their responsibility .Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, healthy and fast choices are available this
days Correct determiner usage
these
people
need to think in
their choices.Change preposition
about
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