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universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what eztent do you agree or disagree?

#universities #numbers #students #eztent
It is widely believed that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female
students
 in every
subject
 . Personally, I strongly agree with
this
 view for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, nowadays both male and female
students
 can go to
school
 together one way
equal
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.
This
 means that the government have promulgated rules allowing all children can go to
school
 not distinguish male or female so male and female
students
 can learn every
subject
.
For example
, physical education is a difficult
subject
 and needs
have
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good health,
however
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 the
school
 allow male and female
students
 can learn it together.
Secondly
, nowadays not only male
males
 can do a
career
 but
also
females
 can do a
career
 .
This
 means that in the present people
believed
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just had
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males
 can do a
career
 because
males
goes
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 to
school
 more than
females
 so
males
 good better, but nowadays families can find
very
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apply
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money more than
males
 so they can
tohave do
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the
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a
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career
.
For example
,
finances
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 knowledge subjects both
males
 and
females
 can learn together because they can do it. In conclusion, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female
students
 in every
subject
. In my opinion,
males
 and
females
 should learn even and enough every
subject
.
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