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You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

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Dear Aman, I hope you are doing well. I heard from Raman that you went to Canada for higher education. I am writing
this
 letter to you because I am
also
 interested in studying in Canada. I will be choosing the Post Diploma course in Computer Aided Design from Alberta
University
.
This
university
 is in the same city where you live. I have completed my bachelor's degree in Mechanical Engineering. I found out that there is a huge demand for design engineers in Canada. Many people in my contacts have already done
this
 course and taken a huge salary. Alberta
University
 is one of the top colleges for computer design, and the placement result is 100
percent
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. I have a small request for you. If I get admission to Alberta
University
, I need support from you in finding a single room close to the
university
.
Also
, check if there is a park nearby as I go for a run every day in the morning. If you need any details
then
 please contact me.
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 faithfully,
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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