Nowadays ( these days), many ( plenty ) people choose \ing ( decide) to be\ing self-employed (freelance), rather than to work\ing for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
There is no denying the fact that plenty of
people
rather than working for company
or organisation decide to Correct article usage
a company
be
freelance. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
essay will discuss the reasons behind this
trend And spotlighting
the disadvantages Wrong verb form
spotlight
to be
freelance.
Change preposition
of being
To begin
with, there are many reasons for making
Verb problem
why
people
working
as freelancers. Wrong verb form
work
Firstly
, to
they get the choice to work two jobs at the same time. Correct word choice
apply
In other words
, some people
want to make profit
from their hobbies, Correct article usage
a profit
while
they drive something else. In addition
, some people
finding
getting up at six o’clock hard, Wrong verb form
find
because
of that, they prefer Correct word choice
and because
work
anytime they want. Fix the infinitive
to work
For example
, my friend Hamza, he
quit Correct pronoun usage
apply
from
his job Change preposition
apply
last
year because he cannot
find himself working in the morning.
In terms of disadvantages, regardless of being Wrong verb form
could not
comfort
about the time, Replace the word
comfortable
also
it is not Rephrase
apply
steady
income. It is Add an article
a steady
also
possible to say that may will come days without sales, and that huge risk, and will be serious
problem if you have a family. Add an article
a serious
In addition
, it is stressful if you have to deal with the all tasks just by yourself.
For instance
, you ought to look for the customers and contact with
them after that you should start Change preposition
apply
work
Wrong verb form
working
of
the order and if you are Change preposition
on
baying
a product you will search Correct your spelling
buying
of
someone to deliver it.
In conclusion, there are many cases Change preposition
for
to
choosing to become self-employed.
It is Change preposition
of
also
true that you will face challenge
days or even can make you broke Replace the word
challenging
whereas
some people
find it stress
.Replace the word
stressful
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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