The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts the
percentage
of
Coffee
and
Tea
consumption habits among Australian
people
in the
last
4 weeks. The data is divided into five areas in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
, and Hobart).
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the proportion of
people
who buy and drink
coffee
or
tea
in the café is dominating in all cities except
Adelaide
.
In addition
, the
percentage
of
people
who bought fresh
coffee
in all cities is lower than that of instant
coffee
. Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart have similar proportions of drinking
coffee
and
tea
habits with the highest
percentage
is
people
who are going to the café at 61%, 64%, 55%, and 63%, respectively. In Sydney and Melbourne, there are more than 40% who purchase fresh
coffee
. ,
Meanwhile
Add a comma
,Meanwhile
show examples
in Brisbane and Hobart, the
percentage
of
people
who are consuming fresh
coffee
is below 40%.
Furthermore
, In
Adelaide
, exactly half of the population consumes instant
coffee
and slightly below that of
people
buying
coffee
or
tea
by going to a café.
Moreover
, similar to other cities in Australia,
Adelaide
also
has a similar pattern of
people
who purchase fresh
coffee
less than 35% of the population.
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