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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
 letter about your article that was published in Daily News. I am in favour of your aspect about the few structures in the town centre being similar in architectural patterns and their artwork. But, the
city
 Kelowna has its own attraction points like Gyro Beach, hiking
rails
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 Knox mountain viewpoint from where you can watch the stunning scene of the
City
 at night. Which is not common in most
city
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cities
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. The main heart-catching place is downtown, where you can see the creativity of builders and artists
to embrace
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 their talent
on
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these
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. To add, the most unique thing about
this
city
 is the train line. You can have a ride on it to watch the astonishing vision of nature through the mountains.
Finally
, I would like to offer you a tour of my town for your future visit to change your opinion. Please feel free to contact me, I will be really happy to give you a tour of
this
 beautiful
city
. Yours faithfully,
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