The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The given line graph depicts smoking

rates

per 1000

men

and

women

in

Someland

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Homeland

. As an

overall

trend,

it is clear that

over the

40 year

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period, numbers in

men

have come down

whereas

an increasing number of

women

have taken up the habit

Initially

, about 600

men

used to smoke in the early 60s.

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number

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decreased to 500 in the

mid 70s

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and

has

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continued to decrease to 400 in the early 90s and just a little below 300 by the early 2000s.

In contrast

to

men

,

rates

of smoking have tripled in

women

with about 100

women

smoking in the 1960 to about 300

women

by the

mid 70s

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. But

this

trend has seemingly changed with the numbers dropping in very small amounts ever since. By the year 2000, around 250

women

were recorded to be smoking. In conclusion, the early part of the century has seen a more extreme difference in

trend

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amongst

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men

and

women

. But by the 2000s, the

rates

of smoking between the 2 genders have come a lot closer than before. In total, the smoking

rates

have reduced considerably in a span of 40 years in both

the

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sexes.