The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table compares six cities in terms of underground railway systems in 3 categories (date opened, length and passengers).
Overall
, the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve more the number of people than the newest one. Looking at the table
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detail, we can see that the London
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is the oldest
system
,
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opened in 1863, and
this
is
also
the largest
system
. The second larger
system
is the Paris, nearly half the size of London, around 199
killometres
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, but serving more than London. The third size of
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is Tokyo, which is the most used,
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1927 million passengers each year. When it comes to
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newest systems, Washington DC
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the most expansion, at 126 kilometres of route in comparison with 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres in Kyoto and Los Angeles, respectively.
In addition
, Los Angeles is the newest
system
,
while
Kyoto is
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and serves only 45 million passengers every year.
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