Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

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in
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abroad has become
the
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new trend now. Parents have been encouraging their
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childrens
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by sending them
to
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abroad for higher studies. It is true that people in India are finding it more convenient for their
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childrens
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children
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to study
outer
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states to get some exposure
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the world.
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also
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wish to complete their
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degree by doing
an international studies
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an international study
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in the field they choose. Countries like
United
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Kingdom,
Canada
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are widely welcoming
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childrens
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to study in their
reputated
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reputed
institution. People who are showing their interest
to study
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abroad are widely increasing day by day. They wanted to get into
a
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top rated
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Qs ranking universities to achieve their goals.
Indian
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education system is far
widely
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and widely
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different from the abroad universities. Parents want their
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to get into the best kind of universities that
was
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the major
reasons
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why they send
their
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next generations to be placed in
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a abroad
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university.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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