The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table depicts the data of Ashdown
Museum
's visitors
while
the pie charts explain the satisfaction
survey result
from Correct subject-verb agreement
results
visitors
during the year before and after renovation.
Overall
, throughout the period after the refurbishment, there was a growth in the total of museum
visitors
and satisfaction
results from the visitor’s surveys compared to the period before the revitalization.
At the beginning of the period before the refurbishment of the museum
, the visitor’s number stood at 74,000 visitors
. Then
, it increased significantly by 18,000 visitors
after the museum
did the renovation.
According to
the satisfaction
surveys, the visitors
who rated their experience as very satisfied prior to the renovation started at 15% before facing an increase of 20% after the refurbishment. Moreover
, the population of satisfied visitors
also
rose from 30% to 40%. Moreover
, during the year after the revitalization of the museum
, the proportion of respondents dissatisfied and very dissatisfied faced a decline at 5% and 15%, respectively. In addition
, those respondents who decided to have no response in the satisfaction
surveys were stable at exactly the same number at 5% before and after the museum
revitalization.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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