One of widely discussed issues nowadays is the threat of smoking. It is undeniable that the cigarettes have become the common thing in our society. However these days people are willing to continue smoking despite its risk.

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of the widely discussed problems nowadays is smoking.

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majority of people know the bad effects of

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cigarettes

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they continue to

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I will determine the causes of smoking and give available solutions to solve it.

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, the main reason

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smoking is addiction. People usually try smoking and think that

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cigarette

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their addiction and health. But the nicotine which is contained in the

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cigarette

directly

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our brain, especially

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our neuron connections.

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recent research

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Istanbul University, smoking

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cigarette

daily will kill nearly 7500 healthy neurons which will affect

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memorizing ability. The second cause that might be noted, in my view, is

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. As we know in

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world the

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of

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among society is rapidly increasing. Because of that, citizens try to find the easiest way to reduce

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degree. Someone may do sport, another

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can eat a lot of sweets,

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part of

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starting to

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cigarette

consumption

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up

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nearly 20 per cent in the

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decade. To solve the first cause mentioned above government should

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create strict rules relating to

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smoking. All teenagers who

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or tried smoking should be punished

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the same

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, teenagers who try to

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must pay a fine,

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teenagers who

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regularly will do social

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. By making laws stronger community will reduce the number of people who will try to

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among the young generation.

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, society should decrease the

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of

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which becomes

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fundamental part of

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life

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trend in the pace of life which will positively affect to

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of

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stress

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. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to

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conclusion that smoking is

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widespread in

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society because of different reasons

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as addiction or

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. To solve it government should make rules stronger and try to reduce

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