The two maps below show changes in University campus in many years.
The display maps describe the update that took place on the university campus. The below information gives brief data about the map.
The map describes information about 2010. There is accommodation near the lake
as well as
university officesRephrase
apply
also
. In the middle of ,campus
there is a lake. There is Correct article usage
the campus
a shops
and even a restaurant. There is a small lawn and seating area. ThereCorrect the article-noun agreement
a shop
shops
a
teaching block for arts and science students. There are so many trees near every place. There is a road. The Shop and a restaurant are very much near to the lake. The road is very much near to the university offices. The atmosphere is eco-friendly because there Add a missing verb
is a
is
so many trees planted near every building. There is even a lawn for people to enjoy.
Change the verb form
are
To conclude
, The above information describes about
the given map. There are two accommodations for the students. The data is about the year 2010.Remove the preposition
apply
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