Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely seperate from social life.
Some individuals claim that the evenings and weekends are a good idea for meeting outdoors with their staff members,
while
others think that professional life
keeps them away from public life
because it is very important in our lives. However
, I am inclined to agree with the second view of this
statement and this
essay will discuss both views and my opinion, which be elaborated on in forthcoming paragraphs.
On the one
hand, a sizeable chunk of the population thinks they have an opportunity to interfere with new career tasks. For example
, economic research has shown that 50% of Job opportunities are opened after discussing public functions, to explain Furthermore
, a Harvard University student presented his innovation to his friends and one
of his friends was released to the internet. After that, his video reached large companies and they invited him to join them. Therefore
, it is important to have such
type of meeting for future goals. However
, I think after working it is not suitable to join friends and I emphasise that after a busy schedule, you should have to take a rest to refresh your both mind and body.
On the other hand
, when considering the second view, people believe that it is more important to maintain a good family life
because having a strong relationship can lead a relaxation not only in your mind but also
physically. For instance
, The Sri Lankan famous businessman Mr Rajeev Rajaputhra is the real character to suit this
. Moreover
, He has a number of companies not only in Sri Lanka but also
abroad. He said "I never mix with my personal life
and my business and I go anywhere or any function with my wife because my first one
is my family. Despite this
, he expresses I also
strive to socialize with my family. Consequently
, I believe that the same, work life
should entitle only workstation but when outside, you are going the outside should never bring anything related to the workplace.
In conclusion, when discussing both points of view, the first one
has a great career opportunity in the long run, and the second one
has to strive to maintain a good family life
. In addition
to this
, my opinion is going to a similar idea that people have plenty of job offers but they have only one
family throughout in whole life
so humans should remember it carefully.Submitted by shainikellapatha on
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