The chart below shows the different types of accommodations chosen by the British when they were on holidays in 2013.
This
chart shows the British's preference on
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for
the
holiday accommodation in 2010.
Across the UK, Most Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
people
choose
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chose
hotel
when they Add an article
a hotel
go
on Wrong verb form
went
a
holiday in 2010. And Correct article usage
apply
secondly
, people
prefer Self-catering, except Northern
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in Northern
Ireland
. Northern Ireland
people
usully
choose Caravan Correct your spelling
usually
secondly
. Interestingly, the figure of
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for
Hotel
and Caravan in Northern Ireland
is only almost 15% of gaps
between them. Correct article usage
the gaps
This
is a notable point compared to England's bar chart. England people
chosen Hotel
is over 50% and nearly 28% of people
use Self-catering which means these figures are extremely skewed on 2 type
of accommodation. Change to a plural noun
types
Also
Scotland and Wales Add a comma
,Also
has
a biased number Change the verb form
have
such
as England's figure.
Overall
, surprisingly over
the UK, Change preposition
in
people
prefer Hotel
when vacation. But Northern Ireland
people
try to choose different accomodation
, not sticking to only Correct your spelling
accommodation
Hotel
. And
Correct word choice
apply
People
tend to do
not Verb problem
apply
want
to stay in Camping and Caravan, except Northern Fix the infinitive
to want
Ireland
people
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