The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as glass bottles are produced and recycled
The first flow chart depicts the process of making glass
containers
, which are bottles while
the second one illustrates the ways to restore them
Overall
, to make
the bottles, Change the verb form
making
it
required a total of four steps and a few ingredients. And about five steps to convert the Correct pronoun usage
apply
containers
before turning them into other items.
At the first stage
of the process, some materials such
as sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed. Then
the mixture is
melted in a furnace which was about 1500 degrees Celsius. After that, the hot glass is put out and Wrong verb form
was
then
shaped by blowing. In the end, the glass containers
were made.
On the other hand
, when recycling. All used containers
are being collected, followed by separating the colour of them. The next step is
removing the impurities inside. After that, all the sorted bottles are being
smashed and melted before moulding to create new products.Unnecessary verb
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