The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as glass bottles are produced and recycled

The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as glass bottles are produced and recycled
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The first flow chart depicts the process of making glass
containers
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, which are bottles
while
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the second one illustrates the ways to restore them
Overall
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,
to make
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making
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the bottles,
it
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apply
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required a total of four steps and a few ingredients. And about five steps to convert the
containers
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before turning them into other items.
At the first stage
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of the process, some materials
such
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as sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed.
Then
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the mixture
is
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was
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melted in a furnace which was about 1500 degrees Celsius. After that, the hot glass is put out and
then
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shaped by blowing. In the end, the glass
containers
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were made.
On the other hand
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, when recycling. All used
containers
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are being collected, followed by separating the colour of them.
The next step is
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removing the impurities inside. After that, all the sorted bottles are
being
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smashed and melted before moulding to create new products.
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