The chart below provides information about the 5 types of transportation that tourists used in a particular city between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
given
bar graph illustrates the data about the proportion of tourists and five different types of travel methods which they used in a particular city from 1989 to 2009.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
usage
of cars has increased, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
usage
of coaches has decreased. Use synonyms
However
, aeroplanes were not a popular travelling method among tourists over the entire span.
Regarding the given graph, there can be seen an increase in car Linking Words
usage
. In 1989, approximately 7% of travellers opted for cars for their travelling Use synonyms
then
it rose significantly by 35%. Linking Words
Conversely
, at the beginning, approximately 37% of people used coaches as a travelling method Linking Words
then
it declined drastically by 15%. Linking Words
However
, in 1999, approximately a quarter of visitors used all transport modes except aeroplanes.
When it comes to aeroplane mode, in 1989, about 5% of people used aeroplanes for travelling. After ,that it has fallen down. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
usage
of trains and the metro has been stable over the given period.Use synonyms
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