Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Digitalization is becoming a part of the learning process at every step of receiving a profession. Interactive items are used in schools and universities everywhere. I completely support
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and pay attention to only invigorating and thrilling things. In order to make them interested in the educational process there is an interactive platform with a large number of films and computer games, that make students more involved in an interesting learning process. Use synonyms
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recent research, there is a lot of proof that if a person learns something and feels anger or happiness, he will remember it for a long period of time. In the same, it works with pupils’ memory and their knowledge will be expanded.
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