The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates data pertaining to the number of United
Kingdom
students
who hold bachelor's and master's degrees across different types of jobs in 2008.
Generally, the data reveals that the decisions made by the United Kingdom
graduate and postgraduate students
shared similar things with taking further
study as their priority after leaving college.
To begin
with, United Kingdom
graduates mostly continue their studies with approximately 29,665 folks signed up for master's degrees. In contrast
, United Kingdom
students
who decided to take voluntary work was quite small with a mere 3,500 students
.
Moreover
, United Kingdom
postgraduates made a similar decision to get further
degrees with around 2,752 people in the largest category. Additionally
, there was also
a small interest from postgraduates to do a voluntary job with only 345 residents.
In summary, the comparison between United Kingdom
graduates and postgraduate students
was quite similar in portion. Most of them enjoyed taking further
application as their next plan.Submitted by floriehendr on
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