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The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the past
humans
 have communicated
face
 to
face
, but nowadays by improving network systems, a lot of
individuals
 by the year have been more and more using
websites
such
 as Facebook and Twitter.
Overall
, I would say that human beings have to use fewer
websites
, and
furthermore
 find the
time
 to communicate,
however
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 using web programs can lead to serious problems. One strong argument in favour of advantages is that
people
 will save
time
, because communicating
face
 to
face
 takes quite a long
time
, and of course if
humans
 have limited
time
.
This
 means that humanity can do many more activities
,
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when platforms are used by
individuals
.
Moreover
 can communicate with someone online. The United World research of Llon Mask showed that
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in
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last
 year just over 42
percent
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 of
humans
 used
websites
.
Furthermore
, the
time
 was used usefully, and the percentage of activities which were done by them was amazing.
Therefore
 using social media in some aspects is good. There are several arguments why Communicating
face
-to-
face
 can be beneficial for most
people
.
Firstly
this
 is a feeling of confidence. When
people
 communicate in
face-to-
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face
 format, some kinds of feelings can be felt by
humans
, which is a really important thing.
According to
 the statistics of 2022 year human beings who spoke
face
 to
face
 did not fear,
individuals
 were very calm.
Secondly
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 it is sociable
people
. For ,example when
humans
 go to another area,
individuals
 can find general language very easily. The statistic below showed that 20 per cent of students were very calm and sociable, because of a lot of speaking
face
 to
face
. ,
Consequently
 format of
face
-to-
face
 is much better than
websites
.
To conclude
 I would argue that there are far more disadvantages than advantages to using
face
-to-
face
 contact. All the above examples can be understandable,
moreover
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face
-to-
face
 communication can give a lot of opportunities.
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