Global warming is creating many problems for the environment and humans. What problems does global warming cause?
Global warming creates so many
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problems
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the enviroment
enviroment
and humans. Global warming is Correct your spelling
environment
increaing
day by day. Global warming is having Correct your spelling
increasing
great
impact on land, air , water and even Add an article
a great
to
lifestyle.
There are so many problems created by global warming to humans Change preposition
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goods
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it will be good for nature.
On the other side global warming great great
impact on Correct article usage
a great
environment
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the environment
birds
and animals
too. Global warming have
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has
even
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an even
great
impact on Correct word choice
greater
birds
and animals
like
they are getting polluted water, air, land and much more. Correct word choice
because
Birds
have to migreat
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migrate
due to
environment
change. Replace the word
environmental
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, animals
have to go from one place to another place. Global warming is created due to
too much pollution. Poor people are facing too much
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many problems
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global warming. Even children are facing problem
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the environment
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite