Global warming is creating many problems for the environment and humans. What problems does global warming cause?

Global warming creates so many
problem
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for
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
and humans. Global warming is
increaing
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increasing
day by day. Global warming is having
great
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impact on land, air , water and even
to
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lifestyle. There are so many problems created by global warming to humans
such
as
due to
global people are getting healthy food
in
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too high price.
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,
due to
global
warming
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people
are have
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to buy
good
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goods
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and
service
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at high
price
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. If man
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eco-friendly
good
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then
it will be good for nature. On the other side global warming great
great
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impact on
environment
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the environment
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,
birds
and
animals
too. Global warming
have
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even
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great
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impact on
birds
and
animals
like
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they are getting polluted water, air, land and much more.
Birds
have to
migreat
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migrate
due to
environment
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change.
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,
animals
have to go from one place to another place. Global warming is created
due to
too much pollution. Poor people are facing too
much
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many problems
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problem
because
due to
global warming. Even children are facing
problem
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due to
global warming.
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describe
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the
problem
which is created by global warming for humans,
animals
,
birds
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environment
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the environment
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too.
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • despite

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