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Some people believe that authorities need to plan for more vertical cities with really tall buildings since our land for the expansion of cities is limited. What are the advantages and disadvantages, in your opinion, of vertical cities that have really tall buildings and everything within these buildings?

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Many officials need to shed more importance
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 town or city planning. The cities are growing wider with population density. Having vertical cities is beneficial as it has many advantages. The following paragraphs explain it in
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detail.
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 world, vertical buildings
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 in optimized usage of land. These
skyscappers
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skyscrapers
 build tall towers that are used for commercial as well
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purpose
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. One of the advantages of these buildings is that
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 it reduces deforestation, thereby keeping the natural landscape intact.
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, New York
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 and Hong Kong have opted for
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tower
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 because of the need to accommodate the growing population.
On the contrary
, there are many other disadvantages of
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vertical living. One
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such
 buildings is that
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rules
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 out the option for patios.
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 to that, the play area for kids is
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 been reduced, which ultimately
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 that
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 physical activities. The residents of the vertical towers often do not know each other as there are many flats in one tower.
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, about 35% of the people living in
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building
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 are depressed as they feel left out because of no social meetings.
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 minimum. To sum it up, I strongly support the fact that the officials need to keep in mind the pros and cons of vertical tower cities as much as it
safe guards
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 natural land with minerals, it
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 makes
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 individual feel alone.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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