The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the value of inventory for
Facebook
,
Apple
, Yahoo and Google from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that the stock prices for
Facebook
increased,
Apple
fluctuated and Google remained unchanged throughout the year.
To begin
with, the market value for
Apple
stood at 5,000 in 2011,
then
later reached a peak of 34,000 which turned out to have the highest value in 2012. Afterwards,
Apple
experienced a dramatic fall to about 7,000 in 2013 and fluctuated throughout the remaining periods.
Next,
Google remained constant between 2011 and 2016 which
also
had the lowest stock rate. Following that,
Facebook
and Yahoo began considerably with similar patterns at 7,000 in 2011.
However
,
Facebook
grew steadily to 13,000 in 2013 which had the maximum inventory rate and there was a significant growth in other years.
Subsequently
, the price of Yahoo reduced gradually to around 6,000 in 2013 and witnessed a minimal drop to 4,000 in 2014.
In contrast
, there was a slight fall from 2015 to 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words facebook, apple with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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