In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this? What actions can be taken to solve this problem

In the recent past,
traffic
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is
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have been
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increasing and that
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has led
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to problems.
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essay will examine the main reasons which are
individuals
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individuals'
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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and
families
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size.
However
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the possible solutions are changing
in
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people
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choices and turning to
smallest
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the smallest
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families.
People
suffering from
traffic
and the main reason behind
this
issue would be .
Firstly
, the population in most countries are growing
due to
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in
the
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family's
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size. In
the
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other words, the extended families could be the significant reason because each member will have his / her own car .
Secondly
, in some countries
people
prefer using their own vehicles
instead
of using public transportation because they want to show their level of life
although
this
will affect
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live quality's. For
instances
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, a survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos
university
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showed that 80% of Omani citizens use their own car
at
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in
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morning
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the morning
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when
the
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they
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are going to work .
Therefore
,
this
seems logical that we are facing
traffic
issue
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issues
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. A possible solution to
this
issue would be
increased
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the
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awareness
between
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people
. If they
knows
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the drawbacks of
traffic
, they will turn to
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the
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poblic
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public
transportation.
Next,
another solution
is encourage
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is to encourage
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people
to transfer to
small
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a small
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family
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families
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each family has 2 babies rather than 5 or more
childrens
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children
this
will lead to
use
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the use
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less
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apply
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number of cars.
Finally
,
government
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the government
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enforces
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cars
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user's
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users
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to pay a tax if
the
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they
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driver
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mor
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more
than 1000 km daily.
Thus
,
this
problem
it
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could be solved if government and citizens collaborate together. In conclusion,
although
the
traffic
jam rise
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due
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du
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due
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to
increase
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an increase
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in the number of
people
and their life routines, reducing the
family
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number of family
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members and
chang
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change
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in
live
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the live
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habit
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it
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would
helps
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help
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to solve the problem
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