You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to request a repair to my notebook’s

keyboard

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that I purchased in your online store two months ago. The necessity to have a notebook appeared when I started to work at home, after searching for the product in many stores I found the one on your company’s website, the delivery was very fast and the equipment arrived at my home in a perfect state ,

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, one week ago I realized that the

keyboard

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started to present some bugs.

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, some keys were not working properly.

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is a huge problem for me since

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notebook is my work tool, in my daily routine I write a lot to communicate with my team and

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send emails to clients.

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I cannot afford a wireless

keyboard

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so I am using the virtual

keyboard

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to do my work but unfortunately, it does not cover my needs since I cannot deliver my projects with the same efficiency that I usually do and

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can cost my job.

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, I request a repair of the equipment as soon as possible since I paid the security in case of some problem like

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. Please, answer me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Karen Agg.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

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