The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 the present day.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 the present day.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 the present day.
The site maps illustrate the changes in the university campus from 2010 to the present day. Generally, there are significant transformations including expansion
as well as
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relocation of buildings.
However
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, other construction and demolition
also
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happened which will be discussed
further
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in the following. As depicted, there are four campus facilities that have been transformed like
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Housing on the southwest that shifted into the
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Facilities.
Additionally
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, the College Office has
also
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functionally changed into a Science Building
while
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the Shops are used as another
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Accommodation now.
Furthermore
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, the Teaching Block is converted into an Arts Building. Another thing to be mentioned is the expansion of the
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Accommodation which is constructed in three different areas (two on the East and one on the West). Despite being demolished, the restaurant has been relocated into the
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Facilities
together with
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the Shops and Offices.
On the other hand
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, the Lawn and seating area no longer exist on the recent map.
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, there is a new road constructed for the University Campus.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words student with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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