The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 the present day.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 the present day.
The site maps illustrate the changes in the university campus from 2010 to the present day. Generally, there are significant transformations including expansion
as well as
relocation of buildings.
However
, other construction and demolition
also
happened which will be discussed
further
in the following. As depicted, there are four campus facilities that have been transformed like
Student
Housing on the southwest that shifted into the
Student
Facilities.
Additionally
, the College Office has
also
functionally changed into a Science Building
while
the Shops are used as another
Student
Accommodation now.
Furthermore
, the Teaching Block is converted into an Arts Building. Another thing to be mentioned is the expansion of the
Student
Accommodation which is constructed in three different areas (two on the East and one on the West). Despite being demolished, the restaurant has been relocated into the
Student
Facilities
together with
the Shops and Offices.
On the other hand
, the Lawn and seating area no longer exist on the recent map.
Lastly
, there is a new road constructed for the University Campus.
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