The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line chart illustrates how much carbon dioxide was discharged per person if they lived in four different countries from 1967 to 2007. Generally, nations can be divided into two parts: one is an increasingly large number of emissions for CO2, which contains Italy and Portugal,
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the opposite is roughly limited the produce of CO2(the United Kingdom and Sweden) For details, unfortunately, the UK maintained the largest part of CO2 emission country among these, But the number of specific amounts of CO2 discharge decreased from above 10 tonnes to about 9 tonnes per person.
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, Sweden had a significant turning point in 1977 which almost equals the UK's emissions, But ,
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, the data declined to 5 tonnes per person in 2007. Italy and Portugal experienced gradually increasing greenhouse gas emissions during the period of time, from 4 to 7 and from 1.5 to 5 respectively, and both of the countries exceeded the amount of Sweden in 2007.
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