Your company has recently introduced a new uniform for the staff. But you have learned that the staff members are not happy about it. Write a letter to your manager about it. In your letter, •explain why you think the staffs are not happy with the new uniform • what you want the new uniform to be like • and give some suggestions to handle the situation
Dear Mr.Pankaj,
I am writing
this
letter to you in regard to the new dress-code
which was introduced for the Correct your spelling
dress code
employees
recently. The majority of the staff members did not like the latest dress-code
combination. I believe the Correct your spelling
dress code
management
shall consider the preference of their employees
.
The staff union appeals the
Change preposition
to the
management
to change the colour of their new uniform as they prefer wearing a combination of dark blue and white formal wear that would be more apt in a
banking sector. In their point of Correct article usage
the
view
the new outfit combination of black and white formal wear chosen by the Add a comma
,view
management
would do more justice in the hospitality industry.
To conclude
, keeping in mind the collective decision of the employees
, we would like you to re-think your decision about the new uniform and change the colour code. On behalf of the team, I request that management
shall
consider their Verb problem
apply
employees
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employee's
employees'
opinion
.
Thanking you.
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opinions
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Yours
Your
faithfully,
Marie Rose.Correct your spelling
Yours
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