Your company has recently introduced a new uniform for the staff. But you have learned that the staff members are not happy about it. Write a letter to your manager about it. In your letter, •explain why you think the staffs are not happy with the new uniform • what you want the new uniform to be like • and give some suggestions to handle the situation

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Dear Mr.Pankaj, I am writing
this
letter to you in regard to the new
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which was introduced for the
employees
recently. The majority of the staff members did not like the latest
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combination. I believe the
management
shall consider the preference of their
employees
. The staff union appeals
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management
to change the colour of their new uniform as they prefer wearing a combination of dark blue and white formal wear that would be more apt in
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banking sector. In their point of
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the new outfit combination of black and white formal wear chosen by the
management
would do more justice in the hospitality industry.
To conclude
, keeping in mind the collective decision of the
employees
, we would like you to re-think your decision about the new uniform and change the colour code. On behalf of the team, I request that
management
shall
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consider their
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opinion
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. Thanking you.
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faithfully, Marie Rose.
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