The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrates the total
number
of speed cameras used,
as well as
the figures on road accidents in Melbourne.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that not only
the
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number
of cameras increase in the 3-year period but
also
the
number
of road accidents and deaths. In 2002, the
number
of cameras is only about
however
the value shows a steady rise in 2004, before experiencing a dramatic increase in 2005. From over 50 in 2004 to approximately under 150 in
number
in 2005, respectively. On the one hand, the
number
of accidents that occurred on the road throughout the given period fluctuated and the percentage hovered around 3% until 2004. After that, the
number
of cases almost doubled when it reached the year 2005.
On the other hand
, the
number
of deaths is significantly lower and from 2002 to 2003 the value hovered at under 1% before soaring significantly at its peak at under 2%.
Then
it gradually decreased in 2005 to about 1%.
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