The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The pie charts depict the findings of research which shows the popularity of numerous pastime activities in Europe between 1985 to 1995.
Overall
, the information provided in the pie charts illustrates in 1985, a large number of older people
in Europe used to watch TV in their free time as compared to those in 1995, whereas
there were majority of people
who spent their pastime talking to their families in 1985 in comparison to those in 1995.
Firstly
, people
witnessed a mild fluctuation in the number of people
watching TV from 32% in 1985 to over 30% in 1995. Moreover
, the proportion of people
talking with friends rose to 26% in 1995 from 21% in 1985. Considering the pie charts, the data indicates that people
in 1985 didn't play computer games, since computers were not invented in past.
On the other hand
, the statistics of people
talking to family fell down and oscillated at around 7% in 1995 from 18% in 1985. Furthermore
, in 1985 people
used to go out to eat more often as compared to people
nowadays. The percentage decreased dramatically to 8% in 1995 from 23% in 1985.Submitted by tania4malik on
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