The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The four pie charts illustrate the ages of the residents of
yemen
and Italy in 2000 and predictions Change the capitalization
Yemen
of
2050. There are three Change preposition
for
age
groups
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paper. Such
as 0-14 years
,15- 59 years
and 60+ years
To begin
with,In 2000, yemen
60 + Change the capitalization
Yemen
age
population
percentage
was 3.6%.Yemen think, the population
percentage
will increase to 5.7% in 2050.16-59 years
residents
were Change preposition
of residents
ress
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dress
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per cent
person
lage
than the 0-14 Correct your spelling
large
years
age
group percentages. In addition
, In 2050, Correct your spelling
yeoman
yeinan
15-59 Correct your spelling
the
years
population
percentage
will more
than the 0-14 Add a missing verb
be more
years
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per cent
percen tay
es
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percentage
On the other hand
, in 2000, Italy
15-59 Change noun form
Italy's
years
population
percentage
was more than the other two groups
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groups'
percentagers
. The Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
percentage
was 61.61. Furthermore
, in 2050, Italy
15-54 Change noun form
Italy's
age
group will increse
than the other two Correct your spelling
increase
groups
. The percentage
will 46.21.
and Italy Overall
, yeman
, Is-69 Correct your spelling
yeoman
years
population
will rise in the future than the other two groups
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