The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrates the process of reproducing removing the
plastic
bottles
. There are nine steps in this
diagram.
To begin
with, plastic
bottles
are put in the garbage bin by people. After ,that all used plastic
bottles
are collected by a lorry which carries plastic
bottles
to the recycling centre. Next,
all the bottles
are stored. Furthermore
, plastic
blocks are passed through the crusher machine and Plastic
bottles
have become little cubes. After that, small cubes are washed.
Subsequently
,little plastic
pellets are through the machine. After that ,plastic
cubes are shifted to raw materials
.They are Heated in the machine. In the next stage , raw materials
are stocked in the pallets. Finally
,some Products, such
as clothes, pencils, bags, and lunch boxes are produced by raw materials
.
Overall
, there are nine steps in this
diagram, such
Change preposition
as
plastic
bottles
, collecting, storing, comparing into blocks ,Crushing and the next step producing plastic
pellets , heating pellets converting raw materials
and producing the products.Submitted by heshanij9 on
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