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produce
food
and
drinkFix the agreement mistake
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containing
highAdd an article
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levelFix the agreement mistake
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of
sugar
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causesChange the verb form
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a Correct article usage
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serious
health
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in the long term.
People
believe
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increasing
priceCorrect article usage
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of the
products
will encourage
people
to consume less
sugar
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this
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governmentChange noun form
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role is to supervise
levelAdd an article
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of
sugar
in any
manufactureReplace the word
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products
as well as
they have to
socializationReplace the word
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howChange preposition
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to healthy life.
There are many foods and
drink
products
containCorrect pronoun usage
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high
levelFix the agreement mistake
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sugarsChange preposition
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. An idea to increase
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of
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this product
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isn’t
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people
to
reduce Verb problem
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buy
itCorrect pronoun usage
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. We have declared that
people
like any
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drink
containing
with Change preposition
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sugar
. In order to prevent
people
is consuming high levels of
sugar
, the
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superviseWrong verb form
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it. One
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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may solve the
problem
is
developFix the infinitive
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foodCorrect article usage
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and
drink
policy which is
controlFix the infinitive
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containing
level
of
sugar
in any
products
specifically to implement in all
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and
drink
companyFix the agreement mistake
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. The
government
has to state
thatCorrect determiner usage
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maximum
ingredient
sugar
in every
product
.
As a result
, the factory didn’t
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increase their
productsChange the noun form
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price
, but they will produce
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drink
with the same
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price
and more
health
than in the previous.
Whilst, there is another
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role to adapt a society
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healthy life. The
government
has to
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how to healthy life.
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restricting the consumption of
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productFix the agreement mistake
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in the manufacturer
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consume Verb problem
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high levels
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combineWrong verb form
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ingredient
will
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serious
to Change preposition
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health
problemFix the agreement mistake
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in the long term
such
as diabetes and cancer.
Besides
, the
government
has to encourage
people
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by
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home.
As a result
, the standard of ingredients will be more controlled by
people
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products
.
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in
the Correct article usage
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solution to prevent
people
consumeWrong verb form
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more
sugar
.
Moreover
, the
government
has to encourage
people
to restrict consume manufacture
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productFix the agreement mistake
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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may contain
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which is
moreAdd an article
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serious
health
problem
in the future.