Tourism is an important industry which has developed the economies of countries in many parts of the world. What effect has tourism had on local communities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The
tourism
industry one of the essential sectors which can be
a
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boost of economies of the
countries
in the world. It has a positive effect on local communities by developing new
business
opportunities
. In
this
essay, I will give some examples based on my experiences.
To begin
with, the new
business
of
tourism
is open in a wide range
opportunities
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in many
countries
. Many
countries
compete to attract international tourists and domestic tourists. They offer beautiful scenery
as well as
original
products
of the country.
For instance
, Bali is one of the best tourist islands in Indonesia. Bali not only has beautiful scenery but
also
has original
products
such
as Bali's peanuts and oil massages. Most the tourist is interested in buying the local product.
Therefore
, It is because of the high demand for local
products
it may boost the economy of a society.
Furthermore
, there are many tourist destinations that have a positive impact not only
for
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business
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sector but
also
on job vacancies. Occasionally tourists need easy access
in
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many
destination
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and
further
explanation about the
tourism
object.
In addition
, there are a lot of travel agents which provide a tour guide. Some of them may work as travel guides including driving a car. Indeed, It become popular among local people because doing
this
can improve finances in society.
To conclude
,
tourism
has a wide range of
business
opportunities
to boost the economic sector in
countries
by providing scenery and local
products
. The local product mostly is created by local communities.
Furthermore
,
tourism
is not only for
a
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business opportunities
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business
opportunities
but
also
for job
vacancy
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vacancies
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.
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