The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The display graph describes the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. The data is from 2000, 2005, 2010 and 2015. The below information on waste is in tonnes by three firms.
Company
C in 2000 it was more than 3, then
by 2005 it was around 6, then
by 2010 it was increased by 7 and in 2015 it was highest with 9. Company
A in 2000 it was 12 then
by 2005 it was nearby 10, in 2010 it was 9 and in 2015 it was 8. Company
B, in 2000 it was around 8 then
it increased in 2005 by 10, in 2010 it was 7. The company
C kept on growing from 2000 to 2015.
To conclude
, the above information describes about
the waste in tonnes by three Remove the preposition
apply
company
name
Fix the agreement mistake
names
with
Change preposition
apply
company
A, company
B as well
as
Correct word choice
and
company
C.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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