The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart and the table illustrate the percentage of employment status of anthropology students after finishing their
bachelor
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after five years.
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over half of the Linking Words
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full-time
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few of them are doing postgraduate study with part-Linking Words
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work
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freelance consultants and Correct article usage
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the
government sector get higher salaries after five years compared to those who Change preposition
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work
for private companies.
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accounts for 52%, which comprises the highest proportion. Followed by those who Use synonyms
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part-time
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, the unemployed, who Use synonyms
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time
with postgrad study comprise 15%, 12% and 8% respectively. As for those who have their Use synonyms
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while
studying postgrad accounts for just 5%.
After five years of working, 50% of the Linking Words
graduates
get paid the most (over $100,000) in the government sector, followed by 40% of those in Use synonyms
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freelance consultants and 30% of those in Correct article usage
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the
private companies. In comparison to private companies, only 20% of the Correct article usage
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