The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart and the table illustrate the percentage of employment status of anthropology students after finishing their
bachelor
degree class and the incomes of anthropology Change noun form
bachelor's
graduates
in work
after five years.
It is clear that
over half of the graduates
work
in
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full
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full-time
time
after they graduated
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graduate
while
few of them are doing postgraduate study with part-time
work
. Most of the graduates
who work
in
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as
the
freelance consultants and Correct article usage
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the
government sector get higher salaries after five years compared to those who Change preposition
in the
work
for private companies.
Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that the figure of the graduates
who have full
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full-time
time
work
accounts for 52%, which comprises the highest proportion. Followed by those who work
part
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part-time
time
, the unemployed, who work
full time
with postgrad study comprise 15%, 12% and 8% respectively. As for those who have their part
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part-time
time
job while
studying postgrad accounts for just 5%.
After five years of working, 50% of the graduates
get paid the most (over $100,000) in the government sector, followed by 40% of those in the
freelance consultants and 30% of those in Correct article usage
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the
private companies. In comparison to private companies, only 20% of the Correct article usage
apply
graduates
have the
salaries that are below $75,000 Correct article usage
apply
whereas
45% of those who work
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