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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart and the table illustrate the percentage of employment status of anthropology students after finishing their
bachelor
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 degree class and the incomes of anthropology
graduates
 in
work
 after five years.
It is clear that
 over half of the
graduates
work
in
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full
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full-time
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time
 after they
graduated
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graduate
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while
 few of them are doing postgraduate study with part-
time
work
. Most of the
graduates
 who
work
in
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the
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freelance consultants and
the
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 government sector get higher salaries after five years compared to those who
work
 for private companies. Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that the figure of the
graduates
 who have
full
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full-time
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time
work
 accounts for 52%, which comprises the highest proportion. Followed by those who
work
part
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part-time
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time
, the unemployed, who
work
 full
time
 with postgrad study comprise 15%, 12% and 8% respectively. As for those who have their
part
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part-time
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time
 job
while
 studying postgrad accounts for just 5%. After five years of working, 50% of the
graduates
 get paid the most (over $100,000) in the government sector, followed by 40% of those in
the
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apply
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freelance consultants and 30% of those in
the
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private companies. In comparison to private companies, only 20% of the
graduates
 have
the
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salaries that are below $75,000
whereas
 45% of those who
work
 for private firms get paid below $75,000.
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