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Some people prefer hobbies that require technology while some prefer hobbies that do not require technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #hobbies #technology #prefer
Dear Mr. Brown, As you know, I am a software developer and recently the situation on the work has not been
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 too well. We have found a bug that could corrupt the whole system and now we need to fix it.
Therefore
, I have to work overtime and have no time to attend
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the course. Despite the fact that I have some time
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evening
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, I have no power to do anything else than to fall asleep. I know that it might sound farfetched but for the nearest
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 of
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 l will be overloaded.
However
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hope that we will manage to fix
this
 problem sooner and I will be free. I could not leave
this
 work and I want to ask you about the possibility of delaying the course. I am still passionate
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 our studies and I will try to do my best to get back to them as soon as possible.
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 sincerely,
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