The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12
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The display graph describes the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12. The below information is on
total
number of trips per year in millions.
In 1990, the highest Change the article
a total
the total
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walking with more than 12, by car passengers it was nearly 4, by cycling it was 6, by walking and Wrong verb form
was
bus
it was around 6 and by ,bus
it was nearby 6. In 2010, the highest was by car passenger
with 11, by walking it was 6, by cycling it was 2, by walking and Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
bus
it was nearly 3 and by bus
it was around 6. Cycling Add a comma
,bus
as well as
walking is almost similar in 2010.
To conclude
, the above data describe a
total number of trips per year in millions. The information is on children ages between 5-12.Correct article usage
the
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