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Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Financial education should be one of the compulsory subjects for school schedules in
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 kind of impossible for everyone to know how to make money more easily
however
, if more people know all economist tricks
then
 they cannot use those techniques to get money from them , and
therefore
, it would be useless. and
on the other hand
, people with more budget and stronger support can have a better idea of finance. Our
world
 requires more engineers or doctors for its own development and what the majority of individuals trying to get is to improve the
world
 in the job they have and that one of the majors that schools are looking for. Students have enough work and studies in colleges and schools more studies make them get bored or get weak in some
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 I showed there are more priorities with math and other subjects
therefore
 humans with better education cannot get wealthy. In summary, to get rich you need to know methods that others do not know about them and people with more support can get better results.
Additionally
, the
world
 already has been revolutionized by engineers so the
world
 relies on them for a better future.
Lastly
, there is so much to learn and we need to look for priority to it
otherwise
, schools need to be open 24 hours a day.
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