Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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. In conclusion, I think from my viewpoint it is a positive development if people with health problems are trying alternative

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and treatments

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of visiting their usual doctor.

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