Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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will try to solve problems by themself
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community's family members
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children and family.
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. , a person will become a self-dependent person. On the negative side, as every coin has two sides in same ways taking
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. In conclusion, I think from my viewpoint it is a positive development if people with health problems are trying alternative
medicines
and treatments
instead
of visiting their usual doctor.
According to
the data Taking
medicines
and
treatment
by own has positive development. Nowadays all
information
can be obtained from the Internet so
this
helps a lot public.
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