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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mible phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that
technology
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 and social media are becoming more and more developed in recent years.
However
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, I totally disagree that
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 devices have a negative effect on reading and writing
skills
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 Admittedly, there is good reason to say that
technology
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 does not have drawbacks for reading.
To begin
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 with, there are a significant number of articles on the
Internet
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 for
people
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 to enhance their reading
skills
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.
For instance
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,
information
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 from newspapers can not be as much as on the
Internet
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. Thanks to artificial intelligence,
people
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 can gain more knowledge and read more
information
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thus
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 they can improve their ability. In the past,
people
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 might have struggled to look up
information
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.
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, young
people
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 can surf the
Internet
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 for almost everything they need. They do not need to spend time as much as old
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.
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, they will have more time for practising their reading skill
In addition
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, there is
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 a compelling reason to argue that writing
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 can get better through
technology
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. First and foremost,
people
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 can find and share their essays on the
Internet
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. A good example is there are a lot of samples and essays shared on social media.
People
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 can read it to refer to their dissertations. Through that,
people
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 can learn more
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 as ideas, construction or vocabulary.
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,
people
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 can develop the ability to make their articles more logical and accurate. If
people
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 find out that their writing is good, they can
also
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 share it with others In conclusion, some argue that machinery devices have some drawbacks for reading and writing
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. In spite of
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, I believe they can bring more benefits to
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's lives
due to
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 their wide
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • brevity
  • abbreviations
  • emoticons
  • literacy
  • spell check
  • predictive text
  • resources
  • content
  • social media
  • forums
  • creative expression
  • multimedia
  • multitasking
  • traditional literacy
  • modern context
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