The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line chart
provide
information about junk food, which altering proportions and types consumed by Australian youths between 1975 and 2000.
Change the verb form
provides
Overall
, despite regular changes in three views of food is expected to increase by the end of period
in spite of Add an article
the period
a period
fish
and chips
.
The graph below clearly shows that the average number of meals in 1975 was between 2 to 100, where fish
and chips
had the highest per cent
, Correct your spelling
percentage
while
pizza demonstrate
the lowest unit. The proportion of Wrong verb form
demonstrated
fish
and chips
decreased rapidly to 82% in 1980, when at this
time hamburgers rose sharply to 40%, while
fish
and chips
increased to 97% in 1985 and after decreased conversely
to 40% by 2000.
Turning to pizza, it is there was a slight increase from 1975 to 1995. It could be expected that the figure was stay
in one place after 1995. Eventually, Change the verb form
stayed
hamburger
became a food with the biggest amount of Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
dish
among other types.Fix the agreement mistake
dishes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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