The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The bar chart depicts the number of
magazines
sold for each person in
Country
A, B, C, D, and E in 2003, 2005, and 2007.
Overall
,
Country
B has the highest number of
people
buying
magazines
, which outnumbered other countries significantly over the years.
However
,
Country
E has the least number of
people
buying
magazines
.
Firstly
, in
Country
A, approximately 50
people
bought
magazines
in 2003,
while
in 2005 it dramatically decreased to around 47 sold
magazines
and continued decreasing to about 38
magazines
sold in 2007.
However
,
Country
B has outnumbered other countries significantly in 2003, 2005, and 2007. In 2003, 50
people
bought
magazines
; after a
while
, it decreased drastically to around 45 in 2005.
Additionally
, it once again dropped from about 56 to 54 in 2007.
Secondly
, in 2003,
Country
C started with around 36
people
buying
magazines
, dropping in 2005, which was approximately 34.
However
, in 2007,
Country
C decreased to around 32 sold
magazines
.
Furthermore
,
Country
D differed from all countries, increasing rather than decreasing. It started with about 19 purchased
magazines
in 2003 and continued rising in 2005 to 20.
Moreover
, in 2007, it increased to approximately 25
people
buying
magazines
.
Additionally
,
Country
E has fluctuated because it began with about 5 sold
magazines
in 2003 and rose to about 6. After that, it decreased to approximately 5 purchased
magazines
.
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