The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The bar chart depicts the number of
magazines
sold for each person in Country
A, B, C, D, and E in 2003, 2005, and 2007.
Overall
, Country
B has the highest number of people
buying magazines
, which outnumbered other countries significantly over the years. However
, Country
E has the least number of people
buying magazines
.
Firstly
, in Country
A, approximately 50 people
bought magazines
in 2003, while
in 2005 it dramatically decreased to around 47 sold magazines
and continued decreasing to about 38 magazines
sold in 2007. However
, Country
B has outnumbered other countries significantly in 2003, 2005, and 2007. In 2003, 50 people
bought magazines
; after a while
, it decreased drastically to around 45 in 2005. Additionally
, it once again dropped from about 56 to 54 in 2007.
Secondly
, in 2003, Country
C started with around 36 people
buying magazines
, dropping in 2005, which was approximately 34. However
, in 2007, Country
C decreased to around 32 sold magazines
. Furthermore
, Country
D differed from all countries, increasing rather than decreasing. It started with about 19 purchased magazines
in 2003 and continued rising in 2005 to 20. Moreover
, in 2007, it increased to approximately 25 people
buying magazines
. Additionally
, Country
E has fluctuated because it began with about 5 sold magazines
in 2003 and rose to about 6. After that, it decreased to approximately 5 purchased magazines
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