The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.

The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.
The diagram illustrates the evolution of the average growth of domestic products among all European countries over a span of 10
years
. Clearly, the data experiences fluctuations in
this
period, characterized by an alternating trend in the first 4
years
, a relatively stable rise in the following 3
years
, and dramatic changes in the
last
3-year period. To be more specific, the data starts from 4.1% in 2000, after several
years
of evolution, and stops at 5.5% in 2004. From 2004 to 2007, the general GDP has steadily grown by 0.7, fixed at 6.2%.
However
, from 2007 to 2009, the data point significantly
drops
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7.7 and
reaches
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the lowest level during
this
duration (-1.5%), followed by a subsequent surge, and eventually stabled at 2.5%.
To sum up
, the
overall
pattern of the Western average GDP has witnessed notable changes throughout the first decade of the 21st century, particularly in the
last
three
years
. The growth point in 2010 is lower than that at the beginning of the period.
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