Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

Nowadays, all over the world, the question of
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boys and
girls
at
school
is omnipresent.
While
some people think the
advantages
of separate boys and
girls
at schools, Others people think
the
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advantages
of mixed
school
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. From my point of view, I think the second perspective is the most persuasive for the reasons discussed below. On the one hand, as far as educating boys and
girls
in the same
school
is concerned,
firstly
, to a large extent, especially in modern times, no matter where in the world you live, they can be more focused at
school
due to
the
fact
that you avoid the question of love with teenagers leading to being more concentrated.
In addition
, when you separate the opposite sex from each other, you can avoid harassment at
school
resulting in the
fact
that some young
girls
can be free without mockery.
On the other hand
, there are reasons that mixed
school
has many
advantages
. First and foremost, by and large, you might teach respect between opposite sexes,
due to
the
fact
they see each other every day, leading to learning together.
For example
, In the 1950s, male and female was separated at
school
resulting in sexism, and some high jobs were reserved just for men and didn’t let a chance for women to show their skills.
Secondly
, and most importantly for me, you should improve the competition between males and females, resulting in preparing them for the future.
Furthermore
, you can avoid misogyny in some professions
due to
the
fact
that they are brought together. In conclusion,
while
some people think the
advantages
of mixed
school
, others hold a different opinion.
However
, in my opinion, I think the second perspective is the most persuasive, to some extent, for the above-mentioned reasons.
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