The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
The display graph shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010. The MET, New York, in the
year
2000 it was 12, in the
year
2001 it was 6, in the
year
2002 it was 6, in the
year
2003 it was 7, in the
year
2004 it was 12 and in the
year
2005 it was 14. In Edo-Tokyo, in the
year
2000
as well as
,2001 it was the highest with more than 12. In the
year
2002 it was 9, in the
year
2003 it was 6, in the
year
2004 it was 8 and in the
year
2005 it was 10. In the National, China, in the
year
,2000 it was 6, in the
year
2001 it was nearly 8, in the
year
2002 it was 11, in the
year
2003 and
also
in the
year
2004 it was 11 but in 2005 it was 16.
However
, the data is in annual visitors in millions.
To conclude
, the above information shows the number of visitors to three museums they are MET, New York, Edo-Tokyo and National, China.
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