The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
This
bar graph illustrates, for the three different types of metal, the average monthly price
fluctuations in 2014. Overall
, the price
of copper and nickel decreased throughout the whole time frame, while
that of zinc increased.
Focusing on the price
of copper and nickel, they started with 2% and 6% changes in price
in comparison with the previous month
, respectively. The percentage of nickel experienced a significant drop by June, recording the lowest percentage at -3%. After that point, its price
fluctuated and recovered at
1% Change preposition
by
at the end
of the month
. On the other hand
, the price
of copper decreased slightly by May to -0.5% and rose gradually over the next seven months, reaching under 2%.
Turning to the price
of zinc, its percentage was at 1% in the first month
. Although
it showed a surge of 3% the next month
, it experienced a downward trend until June, recording a -1%. Over the next six months, though its price
fluctuation was steady until October, it depicted a significant upward trend of 2% by December.Submitted by songcheng619 on
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