The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
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The chart displays the trend of museum visitors in New York, Tokyo, and China between 2000 and 2005.
Overall
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, New York and Tokyo have started out strongly but
then
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dropped in the middle before
finally
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picking up again,
while
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China has had a gradual rise over the years. The data is based on their growth annually and the number of people is counted in millions.
First,
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the Edo Museum in Tokyo ranked the highest by maintaining a high number of 14
million
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people in 2000 and 2001 before coming down by 4
million
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each year to 10
million
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in 2002 and 6
million
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in 2003 respectively. Since
then
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, the numbers have been increasing steadily by 2
million
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per year and reached back to 10
million
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by the end of 2005.
Next,
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at MET, New York, it had experienced a plunge to almost half since recorded in 2000 from 12 mills to 6 mills and remained stagnant for 2 years before starting to gain more interest and climbed back to 14 mills by 2005, ranking 2nd within the 3 spots. China,
on the other hand
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, had the lowest number in the early year with only slightly over 6
million
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but it has been growing steadily since
then
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, hitting its peak at almost 16
million
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people, which is recorded as the most recorded museum explorers among the three nations.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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