The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
The chart displays the trend of museum visitors in New York, Tokyo, and China between 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, New York and Tokyo have started out strongly but
then
dropped in the middle before
finally
picking up again,
while
China has had a gradual rise over the years. The data is based on their growth annually and the number of people is counted in millions.
First,
the Edo Museum in Tokyo ranked the highest by maintaining a high number of 14
million
people in 2000 and 2001 before coming down by 4
million
each year to 10
million
in 2002 and 6
million
in 2003 respectively. Since
then
, the numbers have been increasing steadily by 2
million
per year and reached back to 10
million
by the end of 2005.
Next,
at MET, New York, it had experienced a plunge to almost half since recorded in 2000 from 12 mills to 6 mills and remained stagnant for 2 years before starting to gain more interest and climbed back to 14 mills by 2005, ranking 2nd within the 3 spots. China,
on the other hand
, had the lowest number in the early year with only slightly over 6
million
but it has been growing steadily since
then
, hitting its peak at almost 16
million
people, which is recorded as the most recorded museum explorers among the three nations.
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