Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: - Ask where to find a place to live - Tell them what type of place you’re looking for - Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Dear John,
It was good speaking with you after ages on the phone
last
week. There have been some recent developments at my work. I have been elected to lead the marketing team in Atlanta, hence
I thought I would get your insight into the accommodation there. Since you have been there for over a year, I believe your suggestions would be the best.
The office is located at the intersection of South Street and Marine. As you are aware, I dislike driving at
within the city Change preposition
apply
therefore
I would like to use public transportation more often. My budget is limited to $1000 per month. Although
it should be capacious to accommodate my dog, I can improvise on the furniture.
I have been told that Atlanta has some of the best spots for hiking and other outdoor activities. I would like to explore some of the nearby trails and in doing so expand my friends circle. Since you have additionally
stated the nigh life
is phenomenal, adding to the urban feeling, I will not feel alienated.
I look forward to hearing your suggestions and relocating soon. Regards,
Vinod SelvarajuCorrect your spelling
nightlife
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task achievement.complete response
Ensure all relevant points in the task are covered thoroughly. You may elaborate a bit more on the type of place you are looking for.
coherence cohesion.logical structure
Maintain a logical flow of ideas by linking paragraphs more effectively, especially when transitioning from one topic to another.
task achievement.suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a friendly and appropriate tone, which suits the context of writing to friends.
coherence cohesion.greeting and closing
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which enhances its structure.
coherence cohesion.single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph generally covers a single idea, maintaining focus and coherence.
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