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Parental Involvement in Your Child’s Education. cause and effects

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Parents
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 have a direct effect on the education"s offspring they help children to manage their time and schedule
as well as
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 help them to correct their mistakes when they struggle with some problems. These causes will bring some effects that I mentioned. There are a variety of causes,
To begin
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 with, when scion cannot manage their time and plan,
parents
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 can help them,
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, to get ready for exams they help them avoid stress and arrange their time to study.
In addition
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, when they make mistakes in their studying, they find their
parents
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 helpful in supporting them. it means that they can resolve them easily. Unexpectedly, there are serious effects to be concerned.
firstly
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. They will depend on their
parents
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 even for simple tasks.
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, they will face problems especially when they get older and
also
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 when they join society as mature people.
On the other hand
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, they will lose their spirit of competition and cannot compete well with other children. In conclusion,
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 support from
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 will help children in different ways it would cause them to lose their independence in the older stage of life
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Stick to this essay structure:

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  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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